Friday, May 4, 2012

ImPREZIve Writing

Check out these paragraphs and let us know if you can find the right "voice"!

6 comments:

  1. i think that really cool and Julia had a really good paragraph!!

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  2. I made my mom guess who's was who's between mine and Cate. SHE GUESSED THEM RIGHT!

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  3. I love it...my mom will go crazy when she sees it! I had to wait till the last slide to see mine, but it was worth it!

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  4. i went all the way to the end in then i pressed the back button 2 times!! :)

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  5. That was just to cool to be true!

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  6. I like the Beathany Hamilton writing piece because I am watching soul surfer for the 5th time right now I am at the part with the shark attack

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